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Wednesday, May 22, 2013

Why 'Divergent' isn't a true dystopia

So I just took a class on what make utopian and dystopia literature, and how those genres are defined. Here's my last essay on why the teen hit Divergent isn't dystopian at all.


Dystopia’s the new hot thing in young adult literature. Ever since the bestselling success of The Hunger Games and its sequels, by Suzanne Collins, lots of other authors have tried to capitalize on this trend. One of these so-called dystopias, Divergent, by Veronica Roth, has been met with considerable success. Having read both, it’s apparent to me that The Hunger Games is superior—not only in terms of plot in characters, but in following the traditional conventions of ‘utopian’ literature.
            The two books resemble each other in some ways: The Hunger Games tells the story of Katniss Everdeen, a young woman from the quasi-Roman nation of Panem, who volunteers to take her sister’s place in the titular Hunger Games, where twenty-four children fight to the death on national television. Divergent follows another young woman, Beatrice Prior, in a futuristic Chicago where everyone must swear themselves to one of five strict factions that each strive to exemplify a different virtue.  Certain surface features of utopias are apparent in each—notably, in that each is a futuristic ‘traveler’s tale’, where a character journeys somewhere new and is introduced to that society’s laws and customs by a guide. Katniss travels from her poverty-stricken hometown in District 12 to the opulent Capitol in the company of Effie Trinket, a chaperone who instructs her on Capitol custom and the preparations for the Games. Beatrice leaves her birth faction, which espouses selflessness, for Dauntless, a faction espousing courage, and is initiated into their customs by Four, an older boy. Katniss’s home country, Panem, is a play on words much like the word ‘utopia’ itself, which can mean both a ‘no-place’ and a ‘good-place’.  Panem refers to an old Latin phrase, panem et circenses, ‘bread and circuses’, referring to how Imperial Rome controlled its population. The word also sounds like ‘pan-american’, referring to how Panem encompasses most of North America.
            On the surface, both stories appear to draw on the utopian tradition. But utopian literature doesn’t just tell the story of a fictional society—it tells the story of our own. Classical utopias, like More’s Utopia and Bacon’s New Atlantis describe societies made perfect by solving a contemporary problem—More envisioned a world where the elimination of private property  would end poverty, and Bacon described a society perfected through public funding and respect of science. Dystopias describe societies ruined by extrapolating a contemporary problem to its extreme—in Atwood’s The Handmaid’s Tale, backlash to the feminist movement creates a strict theocracy that heavily limits women’s rights, and Huxley’s Brave New World creates a society where mass production and materialism dominate every aspect of human life. In The Hunger Games, Collins describes a country where the unequal distribution of wealth dooms millions to life in poverty, where reality TV has degenerated society to the point at which children are given makeovers and interviewed on national television before being sent to their deaths.  But the factionalism in Divergent in no way reflects modern society. Categorizing people by their greatest virtues may be an interesting idea for a story, but it isn’t linked to any contemporary problem in our society. Only one of these popular teen novels offers a commentary on modern life.
            First and foremost, the focus of any utopia or dystopia is on the society. That doesn’t mean individual characters cannot be well written or developed, but that the interactions of the characters should reveal something about the system. In The Handmaid’s Tale, Offred, the narrator, paints a comprehensive portrait of the theocracy of Gilead through her interactions with characters who play different roles in Gilead’s ridged social structure. The relationships between the narrator and the other characters tell the story of the society as well as the individual. In The Hunger Games, Katniss initially only trusts the other people from her home district and doesn’t think of allying with an outsider until one saves her life. Initially, she fears and hates the competitors from the wealthier districts, because she feels they have an advantage in the game. It’s not until she watches those competitors die that she realizes her fear and hate should be directed at the governing authorities that created the Hunger Games in the first place. But in Divergent, Beatrice’s story is much more about finding her own identity and making friends than coming to terms with the society she lives in. Katniss asks herself who the real enemy is—the other children coming to kill her, or the government that created the Games?  Beatrice asks herself whether it’s possible for her to be brave and selfless at the same time (the answer is yes, easily, if you’re a poorly written character in a bad book).
            The word ‘dystopia’ is often used to refer to any story set in an alternate society that has very strict, often oppressive, rules.  While genuine utopias in the style of Thomas More’s are hard to find these days—probably because books without conflict have a hard time holding the reader’s attention—modern dystopian fiction builds off the earlier utopian tradition. Certain thematic elements of utopia are easier to recreate than others, such as ambiguous, symbolic names or framing the story as a traveler’s tale. But the ultimate purpose of a utopia or dystopia is to tell the story of an alternate society that either prescribes a solution (practical or not) to, or shows the harmful extremes of, the writer’s society. While Divergent may take place in an alternate society, its lack of social commentary and connection weaken the case for it to be truly dystopian—and weaken the narrative as a whole.  Novels like The Hunger Games, which use characters to tell the story of a greater struggle in society, and relate to the society readers live in, are more than truly dystopian—they’re truly deep. 

And if you want to check out my own novel, Iceclaw, you can find it here.

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